Wednesday, February 17, 2010

Agency - Known User Database

F098-SG-01 - "Buffy" - Anne Winters
DOB - 03/01/1985
DOT - 10/07/2009

Known Abilities - Enhanced fighting skills, enhanced strength, enhanced healing abilities, low level physic abilities. All similar to that of the fictional character Buffy Summers seen on "Buffy the Vampire Slayer.

History - Previously known as Laura [name removed] (female, age 24). Her friend found an active MAU and used it to become a copy of the fictional Buffy Summers, her friend became the fictional character Faith from the same series. Two friends of the pair, used the MAU to become the vampires known as Angel and Spike. Assisted in tracking down the two vampires and was later hired by the Agency, proving to be an excellent Agent. Later disappeared after incident at detention center.

Current Location - Unknown

Psychological Profile - Displays similar qualities to the fictional "Buffy". Possibly a side effect of the MAU combined with subject's original personality. Extremely devoted to her friend, now known as Faith. Excellent Agent, despite some signs of willingness to go off mission.


F099-ED-03 - "Faith" - Hope Lehane
DOB - 10/13/1984
DOT - 10/07/2009

Known Abilities - Enhanced fighting skills, enhanced strength, enhanced healing abilities, low level physic abilities. All similar to that of the fictional character Faith seen on "Buffy the Vampire Slayer.

History - Previously known as Jordan [name removed] (male, age 24). Found an active MAU and used it to become a copy of the fictional vampire slayer Faith from "Buffy the Vampire Slayer", his friend became Buffy from the same series. Two friends of the pair, used the MAU to become the vampires known as Angel and Spike. Assisted in tracking down the two vampires and was later hired by the Agency, proving to be an excellent Agent. Was kidnapped by a MAU user and kept in a brainwashed state for three weeks. After escaping and recovering, Faith went back on active duty. Appears to be in a romantic relationship with Agent R, who frequently works with her. Later disappeared after incident at detention center.

Current Location - Unknown

Psychological Profile - Displays severe aggression in apprehension of combatants and seems to take satisfaction is killing some. Although she has expressed displeasure in this, fearing that she is becoming more like the fictional Faith, who displays the same actions. Her time held captive has only increased her feelings of confusion. It is unknown if she will be a repeat of the incident with F087-ED-01, who was also known as [CLASSIFIED, ALPHA LEVEL CLEARANCE REQUIRED]. Observation is recommended. Despite these issues, has proven to be an excellent Agent. Has become more emotional dependent on her friend, now known as Buffy. It is believed that it is from a combination of her transformation and the lose of her family.

Tuesday, February 16, 2010

The Last Prediction

TOP SECRET - Agency Clearance Level Alpha Required

The following is a transcript of recordings from M0001-XX-01, known as Bill. M-XX-01 has a high level psychic ability, but due to the nature of his ability is unable to be of any use. The following transcript is the last available recording before his death. The true meaning is unknown, but it is believed that it is connected to F098-SG-01 and F099-ED-03. They are known as the former Agents "Buffy" and "Faith".

Transcript Begins

>His time is ending soon, they must return to the light.

>He is coming back, once thought lost forever. Two souls, so different now, but once the same.

>My time is ending now, he is coming for me.

>He will collect them, the children of the device. Building a grand army, he is playing with fire.

>I cannot see their end. At last, a mystery.

>One is now three, soon to be four. A new beginning.

>I knew you would come back here one day. [Rest of recording has been erased.]

Transcript Ends

Sunday, February 14, 2010

Happy Valentine's Day!

Hope you had a nice one.

Still working on the next arc by the way. I got in contact with the great Elrod W regarding a liberty I'll be taking with the MAU itself. All of the emails will be posted around the time of the story as a sort of extra like on DVDs.

Thursday, February 11, 2010

Fictionmania is down

I don't know why or when it will be back up. Although I can guess what caused it, but I won't get into that.

So I'm going to go over the older stories, correct a few errors and then post them here. I'll try and get it done over the weekend.

Also I've done a good bit of progress on the next story. If Fictionmania isn't online by the time I'm ready, I'll just publish it here first.

Wednesday, February 10, 2010

Dropped Ideas

Over the course of writing the series, I've come up with some elements that I didn't use or just dropped. I guess it is part of the natural evolution of a story. But anyway, here is some ideas I didn't use.

Arc 1
  • The Beatles song "Here Comes The Sun" originally played a large part in the story. Faith would have heard the song during her dream. Then later it would have been the thing that lead her to seeing that Spike had a MAU. I dropped it after realizing it was too close to elements of Allen W's Slayer series.
  • There was originally a sex scene between Faith and Agent R, where R's real name would have been revealed. I dropped it mainly because I didn't want it to look like R was taking advantage of her. R's real name will be revealed soon.
  • I had originally planned to show off some of Agent S' past, possibly explaining his latching onto Buffy and Faith. This may show up again later though.
  • Originally Angel would have already used the MAU and become immune to the sun. He would have still died though. I dropped it because I imagined that people would mention that he should have used it the device to become immortal.
  • Spike was originally going to escape. I killed him because I thought that Dennis would be a more compelling villain.
Arc 2
  • Some of the stuff with Faith and Dennis was a bit more detailed. I censored myself because I found it to be too dark.
  • Faith originally killed Dennis. I saved him because I felt it would take Faith down a dark path and because he was too good of a villain to go out so quickly.
  • There was a story set at a mall, but the tone was wrong given the rest of the arc. It would have been like a musical number in Empire Strikes Back.
  • I considered letting Dennis survive again, but killing him was needed to keep Faith from sinking into depression again. Although I still have something up my sleeve regarding Dennis.
  • There was originally an epilogue set sometime in the future that set up some of Faith's future. I may use this actually because I like it.


Also I should note that I'll do some slight editing on the old stories and post them here. I'm a little worried about Fictionmania right now. I'm staying out of the whole thing, but if the place gets overrun by stories like the one that caused all of that, I really don't want to stick around. Fictionmania will still be the home of the stories, but I want a back up, just in case.